Study of a Figure Outdoors: Woman with a Parasol, facing left ~ claude monet
you can't take a shred of criticism
for a while i thought i was allergic to pineapple because when i eat it it gives me a strange feeling in my mouth, and i think my stomach ?
well i just found out bromelain is derived from pineapple
" Bromelain is produced in Thailand, Taiwan, and other tropical parts of the world where pineapples are grown. It is prepared from the stem of the pineapple plant after harvesting the fruit for other purposes. The stem is peeled, crushed, and pressed to obtain the juice containing the soluble bromelain enzyme. Further processing includes purification and concentration of the enzyme. "
andrew writes regarding sepehr's play :
i know what you are writing because i am reading your posts !
its the same problem as zakaj, just half worked voynich, i'm not going to step in and fix it for you !
andrew writes :
if i said infinity is meaning and meaningless ! ?
i write :
there's no room for trying too hard
something clicked about it being meaningless
s, why do you return to andrew's blog ? does it really matter that he occasionally mentions you and your name ?
a school friend of mine i grew up with has been doing drugs since leaving for college
pot, drinking, cocaine, percocet, adderall and other pills
i believe heroine, though he's never admitted to it
recently an anonymous letter was given to the parents, they are thinking about sending him to rehab and believe i wrote the letter
well here i have no reason to lie and i can say it wasn't me, even though i've thought about doing that exact thing
anonymity can backfire onto others
i'm not sure if i believe in rehabilitation, but the most positive thing for him will be being sober for the next several months, brain damage was apparent being around him
You're both going to eat your words once the play is published and receives high praise.
ReplyDeletea lot of shit 'receives high praise'
DeleteMy play isn't going to be shit, and you're not going to demotivate me with your arrogance and unoriginal shit.
Deleteit may be good but I think you're overselling it/ yourself
DeleteReserve constructive criticism AFTER you've read it. This is a problem with Andrew too: you both are so obsessed with comparison and self-aggrandizement, that you're willing to criticize something you haven't even read based off preconceptions. My whole last exchange with Andrew was based off a misinterpretation. He thought I was responding to his previous statement when in fact I was responding to something else. Such a tense, anxious environment is not conducive to anything.
Deletei don't feel tense or anxious
DeleteBecause you are comfortable in your haughtiness, but I have made you feel tense and anxious, in the past, when I put aside the formalities to say what I really think.
DeleteLet me say again: it doesn't make sense to criticize someone's writings before reading it. Even a child could understand the rationale to this.
the play is a product of yourself which is why it can be assumed what it will at least be like
DeleteYou don't know shit about me. I haven't made a blog or anything of that like.
DeleteDo you think you're writing on this blog is impeccable or something?
not too long ago i figured out that most of the time you don't really know what you're talking about
Deletesometimes i think i write something good, most of the time i'm just searching for something good
I do know what I am talking about. Maybe you just don't get it because you're stupid.
DeleteMost of what you have written here as been very bland Houellebecq like interpretations of your experiences, filled with occasional sexual repression. You try to mimic Andrew's style but come off as opaque. How does it feel like to go from being a cuck to a Sangha to being a cuck for a Don Quixote?
My play is going to be ten times better than any crap you've written here. I don't need your judgemental negativity, airhead.
has been*
Deleteyou should write something good now instead of saving it all for your play
Deletedude you think you're so right so why don't you fuck off instead of constantly trying to prove yourself ?
Why don't you shut the fuck up about me, you stupid stalker?
DeleteI am saving it all for my play because it takes effort and makes more sense than just spending time on some half-assed, poorly worked out observations. It's better to take those observations and connect them altogether in a novel, play, or something like that.
I have another play planned and will start writing it after I send this one for a competition soon.
I can take criticism when it's not based off assumptions like saying, "I think your play will suck." Why don't you read it IN FULL before giving constructive criticisms instead of half-assed demeaning remarks.
Deletei wonder if it's a misunderstanding, or if you and andrew really are talking about the point he made in his poem
DeleteIt's a misunderstanding because I agreed with him. He thought I was responding to something else.
DeleteHow many times do I have to say this???
I recently had a well-mannered debate with Zakaj where I defended Andrew's process ontology over his Hinduism's idealistic monism.
that's a good monet, the wind integrates the three elements, the woman, the grass and wildflowers and the sky
ReplyDeleteif you look in the bottom right hand corner of the painting with an electron microscope you can clearly see etched sepehrs new play so at this point the world obviously exists different to what i think ! : o)
i think i see it lol
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DeleteYou're only fooling yourself and Jason, an3drew. Plays need both RIGOR and personal insight, not some half-assed 5 min attention span.
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